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Kengen Uchiha [Approved] KM
Name: Kengen Uchiha
Age: 127
Gender: male
Village: Hidden Leaf
Ninja Rank: Missing- nin
Clan: Uchiha
looks:
Personality: Calm, cold and collected. Despite his nature he is actually a good-hearted person who is sick of war. He however loves a good fight and if someone proves to be a good fighter he will respect them even if he hates them.
Special Characteristics: sharigan three thome, Mangeeko sharigan,
Elements: Lightning, Fire,
Skills/Specialties: Main: ninjutsu
Sub: genjutsu
Jutsus:
Dynamic Action (Dainamikku Akushon)
Character Use: Maito Gai
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only
Dynamic Action is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai will launch himself at his opponent and then use a barrage of strikes and kicks.
Dynamic Entry (Dainamikku Entorii)
Character Use: Maito Gai
Rank: D
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Dynamic Entry is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai will throw a kunai to distract his targets attention, he will then use his speed and agility to quickly approach and attack his opponent from their blind side.
Hayabusa Otoshi - Peregrine Falcon Drop
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only
Hayabusa Otoshi is a Taijutsu technique used by Uchiha Sasuke. While at an elevated position, Sasuke will grab his opponent from behind. Firmly locking himself to their back, he will lock his ankles to their neck to get their body rigid. He will then plant them head first into the ground. Essentially a belly to back piledriver, the move can provide a great concussion to his opponent's head
Name: Henge no Jutsu, 変化の術, literally "Transformation Technique", English TV "Transformation Jutsu"
Type: E-rank, Supplementary
Users: Ninja Academy graduates
Hand Seals: Dog, Boar, Ram
Element:N/A
This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
Konoha Dai Senkou - Leaf Great Light Rotation
Character Use: Maito Gai
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only
Konoha Dai Senkou is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Maito Gai. After charging his opponent, Gai will unleash a powerful kick which will spin his opponent away.
Substition Jutsu
Element:N/A
Rank:E
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu, 分身の術, literally "Clone Technique", English TV "Clone Jutsu", UK DVD "Art of Body Splitting", Viz "Art of the Doppleganger"
Element: N/A
Rank:E
Description: This technique creates intangible clones of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Chidori
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description: Chidori (a.k.a. Raikiri) is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Hatake Kakashi utilizing the Lightning Element. Chidori allows him to cut through any foe. Later, Uchiha Sasuke used his Sharingan and the training of Kakashi to also learn the technique. It was given the nickname Raikiri after it was said Kakashi used the technique to cut a lightning bolt in two. Chidori is used for assassination purposes. Activating the body to focus chakra to the hand, Kakashi and Sasuke's hand become enveloped by an electrical force. This force is their chakra altered in nature to an electrical current. By altering the shape of the force, similar to an electrical discharge, they can decide the power and range of the attack.
Chidori Speed:
S- rank
Element: Lightning
Dscription: used with chidori. Moves at the speed of sound and shcocks whoever he touches.
Lightning Doom
A-Rank
Element: Lightning
Description: Creates a lightning monster that can change it's shape.The power of the monster depends on the amount of eletricity in the area.
Stable Mongekyou Sharingan
Rank: None, possibly A-S
Note: Special Bloodline Technique
Element: N/A
A Mangekyou verison that prevents bleeding of the eyes. This verison is different from the Enteral Mangekyou because the user is not invincable, but can live forever if noone kills them
Amaterasu
Rank: None, possibly A-S
Note: Special Bloodline Technique
Element: N/A
Description: Amaterasu, named for the Goddess of the Sun, is a Ninjutsu technique which uses the Mangekyou form of the Sharingan eye to create a powerful black fire. This jutsu is generated by the right Mangekyou eye. It has been said that anything within the Mangekyou's vision will burn to ash if consumed by the fire. The fire itself is said to burn for 7 days and 7 nights. Because of the amount of chakra needed to use the technique, it can only be used on a very limited basis daily. Though it is regarded as the strongest of Mangekyou's physical attacks, usage of the ability will degrade the eye further and lead the user to blindness.
Tsurkyomi
Rank: None, possibly A-S
Element: N/A
Description: Tsukuyomi, named for the God of the Moon, is a Genjutsu technique which uses the Mangekyou form of the Sharingan eye to generate a powerful illusion. This jutsu is generated by the left Mangekyou eye. This highly advanced technique can not be used extensively because of the toll it places on the user. To utilize the illusion, the clan member will look into the eyes of his opponent and cast a Genjutsu spell on them. The illusion takes place in the mind of the one affected, while under the jutsu the victim is at the total mercy of the user. The user has full control over space and time in the jutsu and can place the one affected through any hell they desire for any length desired. The technique itself only lasts for but a second in reality, but the one affected could have lasted through several days of torture.
Susanoo
Rank: None, possibly A-S
Element: N/A
Description: Susanoo, named for the God of the Sea and Storms, is a technique which uses the Mangekyou form of the Sharingan eye to create a sword wielding spectral form which will surround the user. This jutsu is generated by both Mangekyou eyes. Susanoo will first form around the user as a skeleton. This skeletal form will then generate muscle and armor for battle and wield both a sword and shield.
The sword is formed out of the sake in the gourd it holds, meaning the sword has no true physical form. This legendary weapon, known as Totsuka's Sword and the Sakegari (Sake Cutting) Long Sword, utilizes the main ability of the jutsu. Anyone or anything cut by the blade will be sealed away into a Genjutsu of blissful oblivion until the end of time. It is said the sword is thus the ultimate counter to Orochimaru's Kusanagi Sword. The shield is known as Yata's Mirror. It is said this shield can defend against any attack. Together the sword and shield will make the Susanoo user nearly invincible. Like other Mangekyou techniques, usage of Susanoo will damages the eyes and health of the user.
Shadow Clone
Rank:B
Element: N/A
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.
Character Use: Jiraiya
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. Jiraiya will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.
Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke, Yamashiro Aoba, Uchiha Fugaku, Uchiha Obito, Uchiha Itachi, Hatake Kakashi
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Katon Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child.
Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Katon Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
Shadow clone explosive
A Rank
Element: N/A
Description:Itachi is capable of creating Shadow Clones and can cause them to explode on command. The explosion is quite powerful and can severely injure if not kill those caught in its blast.
Kokuangyou no Jutsu
Rank: A
Element:N/A
Description: Kokuangyou no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the ninja's opponent to be enveloped in total darkness. While in the black void, the ninja will be unable to see any incoming attack or threat
Demonic Illusion Hell Fire Technique
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Description: Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a vision of fire. After Yoroi forms the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety.
History/Background Story: Kengen is a son of Scion, an akatsuki member. Scion was attacked later and lost the child and his twin brother. Kengan and his brother , Itan were found by a shinobi who took him home as his sons. During that time Kengen developed a close relationship with his teammate Kaki Hyaya. Later, when the ninja died and Kengen was 11, Scion came and used a brainwashing jutsu to make Kengen kill Kaki to get the mongekko.Scion made his brother do the same thing. Kengen and Itan were horrified at what they did and hearing the police force, ran away with Scion to join what would become Akatski.
Later, Itan rebelled and tried to kill Scion, however he failed and Scion badly wounded him. As he lay dying Itan transferred his Mongekko Sharigan to Kengen creating a "Stable Mongekko Sharigan' which prevented blindness and caused minor immortality.
Eventually, his dad tried to brainwash him again however he failed and Kengen killed him. He ran away from akatsuki and became a missing-nin. His sharigan and good genes allowed him to live for so long.
One day when Kengen was about 36 he met a boy named Zeo who was dying. After nursing him back to health Kengen took him as his son and settled down in Hidden Mist.
After 30 years Kengen was 67 and the Mist village ordered all kekai genaki be killed. Kengen escaped, but Zeo died which made Kengen angry and icy in social conversations. Plus out of anger he would destroy whole mountains.
Later, when Kengen cooled his anger and he was 80, he devoted his life to mastering the sharigan and made a wife and 2 kids. His life was normal for 20 years until a mad ninja killed his family when he was out training. The things Kengen did to that ninja shoud not be spoken of.
After killing the ninja, Kengen realized it was pointless to seettle down and live a normal life. Instead, he decided to train and eventually capture missing-nin. Currenty, he is honing his sklls and trying to help save the world in a way no one who is doing it.
RP sample- Kengen was walking through a forest. He stopped and activeted his sharigan. A mist ninja was in the clearing. Kengen jumped in front of him and rammed him in the stomach with a kuani. After that he quickly used Dyamic Entry to stun the ninja.
"Why are you doing this" said the ninja "I didn't do anything to you"
Kengen laughed " You're a missing and a mist ninja. I hate both. Lucky you."
"Please, I'll give up kiilling just spare me"
'Alright, Tsurkyomi!"
72 hrs later the man was begging to be killed.
"Your wish is granted."
Then he tore off his arm and growled. "this is for what you did to Zeo" he said killing the ninja.
Age: 127
Gender: male
Village: Hidden Leaf
Ninja Rank: Missing- nin
Clan: Uchiha
looks:
Personality: Calm, cold and collected. Despite his nature he is actually a good-hearted person who is sick of war. He however loves a good fight and if someone proves to be a good fighter he will respect them even if he hates them.
Special Characteristics: sharigan three thome, Mangeeko sharigan,
Elements: Lightning, Fire,
Skills/Specialties: Main: ninjutsu
Sub: genjutsu
Jutsus:
Dynamic Action (Dainamikku Akushon)
Character Use: Maito Gai
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only
Dynamic Action is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai will launch himself at his opponent and then use a barrage of strikes and kicks.
Dynamic Entry (Dainamikku Entorii)
Character Use: Maito Gai
Rank: D
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Dynamic Entry is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai will throw a kunai to distract his targets attention, he will then use his speed and agility to quickly approach and attack his opponent from their blind side.
Hayabusa Otoshi - Peregrine Falcon Drop
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only
Hayabusa Otoshi is a Taijutsu technique used by Uchiha Sasuke. While at an elevated position, Sasuke will grab his opponent from behind. Firmly locking himself to their back, he will lock his ankles to their neck to get their body rigid. He will then plant them head first into the ground. Essentially a belly to back piledriver, the move can provide a great concussion to his opponent's head
Name: Henge no Jutsu, 変化の術, literally "Transformation Technique", English TV "Transformation Jutsu"
Type: E-rank, Supplementary
Users: Ninja Academy graduates
Hand Seals: Dog, Boar, Ram
Element:N/A
This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
Konoha Dai Senkou - Leaf Great Light Rotation
Character Use: Maito Gai
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only
Konoha Dai Senkou is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Maito Gai. After charging his opponent, Gai will unleash a powerful kick which will spin his opponent away.
Substition Jutsu
Element:N/A
Rank:E
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu, 分身の術, literally "Clone Technique", English TV "Clone Jutsu", UK DVD "Art of Body Splitting", Viz "Art of the Doppleganger"
Element: N/A
Rank:E
Description: This technique creates intangible clones of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Chidori
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description: Chidori (a.k.a. Raikiri) is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Hatake Kakashi utilizing the Lightning Element. Chidori allows him to cut through any foe. Later, Uchiha Sasuke used his Sharingan and the training of Kakashi to also learn the technique. It was given the nickname Raikiri after it was said Kakashi used the technique to cut a lightning bolt in two. Chidori is used for assassination purposes. Activating the body to focus chakra to the hand, Kakashi and Sasuke's hand become enveloped by an electrical force. This force is their chakra altered in nature to an electrical current. By altering the shape of the force, similar to an electrical discharge, they can decide the power and range of the attack.
Chidori Speed:
S- rank
Element: Lightning
Dscription: used with chidori. Moves at the speed of sound and shcocks whoever he touches.
Lightning Doom
A-Rank
Element: Lightning
Description: Creates a lightning monster that can change it's shape.The power of the monster depends on the amount of eletricity in the area.
Stable Mongekyou Sharingan
Rank: None, possibly A-S
Note: Special Bloodline Technique
Element: N/A
A Mangekyou verison that prevents bleeding of the eyes. This verison is different from the Enteral Mangekyou because the user is not invincable, but can live forever if noone kills them
Amaterasu
Rank: None, possibly A-S
Note: Special Bloodline Technique
Element: N/A
Description: Amaterasu, named for the Goddess of the Sun, is a Ninjutsu technique which uses the Mangekyou form of the Sharingan eye to create a powerful black fire. This jutsu is generated by the right Mangekyou eye. It has been said that anything within the Mangekyou's vision will burn to ash if consumed by the fire. The fire itself is said to burn for 7 days and 7 nights. Because of the amount of chakra needed to use the technique, it can only be used on a very limited basis daily. Though it is regarded as the strongest of Mangekyou's physical attacks, usage of the ability will degrade the eye further and lead the user to blindness.
Tsurkyomi
Rank: None, possibly A-S
Element: N/A
Description: Tsukuyomi, named for the God of the Moon, is a Genjutsu technique which uses the Mangekyou form of the Sharingan eye to generate a powerful illusion. This jutsu is generated by the left Mangekyou eye. This highly advanced technique can not be used extensively because of the toll it places on the user. To utilize the illusion, the clan member will look into the eyes of his opponent and cast a Genjutsu spell on them. The illusion takes place in the mind of the one affected, while under the jutsu the victim is at the total mercy of the user. The user has full control over space and time in the jutsu and can place the one affected through any hell they desire for any length desired. The technique itself only lasts for but a second in reality, but the one affected could have lasted through several days of torture.
Susanoo
Rank: None, possibly A-S
Element: N/A
Description: Susanoo, named for the God of the Sea and Storms, is a technique which uses the Mangekyou form of the Sharingan eye to create a sword wielding spectral form which will surround the user. This jutsu is generated by both Mangekyou eyes. Susanoo will first form around the user as a skeleton. This skeletal form will then generate muscle and armor for battle and wield both a sword and shield.
The sword is formed out of the sake in the gourd it holds, meaning the sword has no true physical form. This legendary weapon, known as Totsuka's Sword and the Sakegari (Sake Cutting) Long Sword, utilizes the main ability of the jutsu. Anyone or anything cut by the blade will be sealed away into a Genjutsu of blissful oblivion until the end of time. It is said the sword is thus the ultimate counter to Orochimaru's Kusanagi Sword. The shield is known as Yata's Mirror. It is said this shield can defend against any attack. Together the sword and shield will make the Susanoo user nearly invincible. Like other Mangekyou techniques, usage of Susanoo will damages the eyes and health of the user.
Shadow Clone
Rank:B
Element: N/A
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.
Character Use: Jiraiya
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. Jiraiya will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.
Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke, Yamashiro Aoba, Uchiha Fugaku, Uchiha Obito, Uchiha Itachi, Hatake Kakashi
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Katon Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child.
Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Katon Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
Shadow clone explosive
A Rank
Element: N/A
Description:Itachi is capable of creating Shadow Clones and can cause them to explode on command. The explosion is quite powerful and can severely injure if not kill those caught in its blast.
Kokuangyou no Jutsu
Rank: A
Element:N/A
Description: Kokuangyou no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the ninja's opponent to be enveloped in total darkness. While in the black void, the ninja will be unable to see any incoming attack or threat
Demonic Illusion Hell Fire Technique
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Description: Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a vision of fire. After Yoroi forms the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety.
History/Background Story: Kengen is a son of Scion, an akatsuki member. Scion was attacked later and lost the child and his twin brother. Kengan and his brother , Itan were found by a shinobi who took him home as his sons. During that time Kengen developed a close relationship with his teammate Kaki Hyaya. Later, when the ninja died and Kengen was 11, Scion came and used a brainwashing jutsu to make Kengen kill Kaki to get the mongekko.Scion made his brother do the same thing. Kengen and Itan were horrified at what they did and hearing the police force, ran away with Scion to join what would become Akatski.
Later, Itan rebelled and tried to kill Scion, however he failed and Scion badly wounded him. As he lay dying Itan transferred his Mongekko Sharigan to Kengen creating a "Stable Mongekko Sharigan' which prevented blindness and caused minor immortality.
Eventually, his dad tried to brainwash him again however he failed and Kengen killed him. He ran away from akatsuki and became a missing-nin. His sharigan and good genes allowed him to live for so long.
One day when Kengen was about 36 he met a boy named Zeo who was dying. After nursing him back to health Kengen took him as his son and settled down in Hidden Mist.
After 30 years Kengen was 67 and the Mist village ordered all kekai genaki be killed. Kengen escaped, but Zeo died which made Kengen angry and icy in social conversations. Plus out of anger he would destroy whole mountains.
Later, when Kengen cooled his anger and he was 80, he devoted his life to mastering the sharigan and made a wife and 2 kids. His life was normal for 20 years until a mad ninja killed his family when he was out training. The things Kengen did to that ninja shoud not be spoken of.
After killing the ninja, Kengen realized it was pointless to seettle down and live a normal life. Instead, he decided to train and eventually capture missing-nin. Currenty, he is honing his sklls and trying to help save the world in a way no one who is doing it.
RP sample- Kengen was walking through a forest. He stopped and activeted his sharigan. A mist ninja was in the clearing. Kengen jumped in front of him and rammed him in the stomach with a kuani. After that he quickly used Dyamic Entry to stun the ninja.
"Why are you doing this" said the ninja "I didn't do anything to you"
Kengen laughed " You're a missing and a mist ninja. I hate both. Lucky you."
"Please, I'll give up kiilling just spare me"
'Alright, Tsurkyomi!"
72 hrs later the man was begging to be killed.
"Your wish is granted."
Then he tore off his arm and growled. "this is for what you did to Zeo" he said killing the ninja.
Last edited by Kengen on Thu Aug 07, 2008 6:01 am; edited 15 times in total
Kengen- Missing Nin
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Join date : 2008-08-03
Re: Kengen Uchiha [Approved] KM
Add more to personality, looks, and Rp sample. Also can only have 1 S rank move.
Re: Kengen Uchiha [Approved] KM
Spell check, and add more history. If you're 127 years old. You should be able to at least do 5 full paragraphs.
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Re: Kengen Uchiha [Approved] KM
you still need a bigger rp sample and you still need to limit to only 1 S rank jutsu
Re: Kengen Uchiha [Approved] KM
Still need a bigger rp sample and some of your bloodline techniques seems a little to powerful so I'm going to need a second mods opinion on it.
Re: Kengen Uchiha [Approved] KM
More History.
Limit your character with the bloodline traits and jutsu. I'm going to say only 5.
And rank them. I will not approve "unknowns."
Also, some techniques that the sharingan possess are only known to certain users. I doubt you could have learned all of them.
Limit your character with the bloodline traits and jutsu. I'm going to say only 5.
And rank them. I will not approve "unknowns."
Also, some techniques that the sharingan possess are only known to certain users. I doubt you could have learned all of them.
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Re: Kengen Uchiha [Approved] KM
Once you add more to your Rp sample you should be able to be approved.
Re: Kengen Uchiha [Approved] KM
Alright.
-Need a better RP sample.
-List all the jutsus that you use; do not just say, "The Uchiha Jutsus."
- Spell check please.
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Mongekko Jutsu- Itami
Rank:None, possibly A-S
Note: Special Bloodline Technique
Type: Attack, Defense, Supplementary
Element: N/A
This jutsu allows the user to read minds. This jutsu takes place in the left eye and is used often with Tsurkyomi so the user can completly destoy the victims sanity. Kengen got this jutsu from his brother.
Explain how he reads minds.
-Need a better RP sample.
-List all the jutsus that you use; do not just say, "The Uchiha Jutsus."
- Spell check please.
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Mongekko Jutsu- Itami
Rank:None, possibly A-S
Note: Special Bloodline Technique
Type: Attack, Defense, Supplementary
Element: N/A
This jutsu allows the user to read minds. This jutsu takes place in the left eye and is used often with Tsurkyomi so the user can completly destoy the victims sanity. Kengen got this jutsu from his brother.
Explain how he reads minds.
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Re: Kengen Uchiha [Approved] KM
Genjutsus couldn't give you a view into someone's mind. Unless you did some sort of interrogation one when they think their are being tortured for information on what their thinking.
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